Ek arse baadmuzse meeleyAur jaatey jaate deel main tadap chchod gaye Dhadkan deel ki le gaye
Fariyaad kartey thy tuum Kiyaad nahi karatey tuumhe hamm Beete hue palon ki yaadey to Tuum le gaye apane saath Bataao kaise kareyhamm tuumko yaad Jaankar kiishaq ko main ibaadat manta hoon Kitane hi mera imtahaan le gaye Kaun kahatanasha sirf sharaab main hain Shabaab ka jaam dekar mere hosh legaye
Jall rahe hain deel ke aramaan Muuhabbat ke laava main Roye bhi kees tarah ki Aap aasoon bhi hamare saath legaye...
Apane astitva ko khoye beenaMere astitva main sama jaao Apani dhoop main jalane se Meri chchaavo main aa jaao
Apane chahere ki khamoshi chchuupakar Apane shabdon main meri aawaaz bann jao Laakho gam aaye jivan main pheer bhi Meri aankhon main Suunahare sapane basaa jaao
Jaise baadal aur paani ki yaari hai Jaise phool aur suugandh ki yaari hai Vaise hi jiyenge hamm aur tuum Bass yoonhi saath saath chalkar hardamm Meri zindagi tuum merey saath jiye jaao ....................................................aameen
I read your following comments given by you in my poem "EK KHWAYISH MUHABBAT KI"/ ---------------------------------------------------------
chandrakant parmar said...
7:23 PM | 16/Jul/08 | |
aisi hi mithi mithi bate sun fisal jati hai ladkiya.............. aur ye sab kavita me mast lagta hai,but you have nice written frnd koi bhi na nahi kahengi muhbat ke liye .line lag jayegi
When i read you such nasty comments, i became very sad.
I never thought you have a dirty mind. I request you to please refrain from posting such type of comments on my Iland.If you post such comments next time, I will block your ID and will report to Rediffmail Iland, to ban you from Iland, as you are not worth person to be on Iland.
On Iland we all post our creativity and others give their comments, saying what is good and what to be corrected. Here we are like one family, always take care of others and never think anything what you have written in your comments.
By giving such comments you have not only hurt me, but you have hurt the feelings of all the Ilanders.
I request all my Ilander friends to please always bring such stupidity of any of the Ilander in the form of posting a blog on such people.
Ek Khwahish muhabbat ki Ke tujhpe waari jaaoon Tere saare gam samet loon Tujhpe saari khushiyan lutaaoon Tere khayalon mein jeeta main Teri baahon mein zinda hoon Teri khuushbu rahati hai Hamesha meri saanson mein Tera tasavuur rahata hai Hamesha mere khayalon mein Itna na tadpaao hamain Ek choti si guzaarish hai Thoda kareeb aao mere Thoda kareeb aane do mujhe Tumhara hoon hamesha Tumhara saath chahta hoon Tumhari har khushi pe Nisaar hona chahta hoon Chhoti si jo yeh guzaarish hai Ek khwahish mohabbat ki Use poora kar dena humkadam Humara hayaat e safar abhi bahut hai baaki ...........................aameen
Jab se aaya hoon tuumhare shahar mainBass ek aas liye baitha hoon Ki jaate waqt saath tuumhe le jaaoo
Yahaan Chaaro taraf bhid bhaad logon ka shor hai Par in sabke beech meri nazar tuumhari aur hai.
Har waqt aakar baithata hoon tuumhare saamane Sochata hoon tuum dekhati ho muzko Sochata hoon hai yahaan laakho mere jaise; Pheer kaisee tuumhari nazar muz par pade Sochkar rah jaata hoon; pheer bhi Tuumko niharata rahata hoon.
Aaj voh aakhari ghadi agayi hai Sabaki nazare tuum par gadi hai Ki maano har koyi tuumhe pana chaahata hai Har koyi tuumse bandhana chaahata hai
Magar mera sapana sach hua Aakhir maine tuumko paa hi liya Sabaki nazare muuz par gadi thi Yeh voh suukhad ghadi thi Aankhon se ashruu dhara bahi thi
Maine tuume chuuma, aur Chaaro aur harsho-uullas chchaya Log chiilllane lage Main tuumko chuumata raha Log chillatey rahe
Bheed meri aur bhaage; Kandhon par muuze ootha liya Tuum mere haatho mey thi Kaise suukhad ye ghadi thi
Voh meri zindagi ki pahali TROPHYthi Jo muuze BEST DIRECTOR ke liye dee gayi thi. ....................................aameen PS::::::::::::::: (This poem I had written, after I was Awarded with All India Sanjiv Kumar Memorial Award TROPHY at Shimla for BEST DIRECTION)
Taraash ke kalpanaon ko maine ek muurat hai banaayi Mruudu samvedanaon ko bhar kar hai use sajaayi Hai voh amuurt par lagati har ghadi voh muurt Khidaki mann ki kholu to voh samane dikhati hai Sharm aur haya ke alankaar sajkar zuumati hui Samandar yeh sapano ka muze kabhi betaab lagata hai Aur chaah har ghadi ki maujo se khelane ki Mann ki savaari kalpanaon ke ashwa par hai Magar abhi pankh lagakar tum sang gagan main udana hai...... ...........................................aameen
Aaj kuuchch aisee baat ho gayi ki achaanak oonse muulaaqat ho gayi
dosti ke beej boye the hamne pedd banate hi pyaar ki uuspar barasaat ho gayi
nazaron ke anjaam se anjaan the hamm aap se nazarey mili aur kuuchch karamat kar gayi nazaron ke teer chchedd gaye deel ko aur deel main ek tuufaan ki aagahi ho gayi
maikhaane ki hame to koyi zaroorat na rahi tuumhari aankhon ke jaam pineki aadat jo ho gayi
berang lagati ees duuniya main saptrangi baadalon ki garima chcha gayi
deel kee har-ek dhadkan ko ab to tuumhare naam kee pahachaan ho gayi
dekhchahere kee tazagi logon ko bhituumse milan kee baat pata chal gayi........
Naa kuuchch labon se kah sake hamPar yeh na samazana ki nahi chaahate tumhe ham Chaahatey hai tuumhe aaj bhi eetanaa hi Phir bhi chaahat ka elaan nahi karate sare-aam hamm Ki bann jaye na kahi tamasha yeh muuhabbat Nahi karate elaan ees chaahat ka hamm
Magar kuuchch voh baat hai tumhare pyaar main Varana tuumhe chaahane kee bhuul kabhi na karatey hamm Jaanta hoon main kee nahi ho sakata hai Milan hamaara Khuush hoon tuumhare pyar ke har-ek lamhe main
O !! deelbar N a chalaavo teer nazaron se Deel hamaara ghayal hota hai Tuumhari palakon ki ishaaron se Tumm basi ho saanson main meri Beena saans kya koyi ji sakata hai
Dhaayi akshar prem ke padhane se Badala badala sa hai jiwan Deel ki dhadakane bhi Jawaa hoti haituumhaare naam se Kyon kahoon main kitana chaahata hoon tuumhe pataa hai sabhiko main kitana chaahata hoon tuumhe
magar tuum ho khaamosh Tuumhaari khaamoshi ko main kya kahoon jaanatey ho tuum ki nahi ji sakata tuum been magar pheer bhi rahatee ho muuzse door pheer inn tanhaayiyon ko main kya kahoon.........
IMTAHAAN
YUUNHI SAATH SAATH
EK KHWAYISH MUUHABBAT KI
AYE ZINDAGI
AUR TUUM MERI HO GAYI
MRUUDU SAMVEDANA
MUULAQAT !!
YEH KAISA PYAAR
O!!!!!! DILBAR